How's my Driving?

How do you think I'm doing as the protag of Jisei/???/Kangai/spoilername? Any criticism or commentary is welcome.

Or just letting me know other Jisei fans exist? That's cool too. Always willing to meet a fellow fan!

Anon on/IP Logging off. I don't screen comments, sorry. Feel free to drop me a PM if you want to talk in private.